Today, when I learn the new text in Chinese class, I find a picture which catches my attention. It is a girl who has big eyes. She lives in the poor country. She is writing homework. From her eyes, I can feel her strong desire to read. I feel so lucky to have the chance to go to school and receive good education. 今天，我在语文课上学习新的课文的时候发现了一幅吸引了我注意力的画。那是一个有着大眼睛的女孩。她住在贫穷的乡村。她正在写作业。从她的眼睛里，我能感觉到她强烈的读书愿望。我感到很幸运有机会上学，接受良好的教育。

非常好的表达方式，孩子一定很优秀，赞一个！